Trifecta

Evening Ceremonies

Early hours of evening
Spent watching each tooth of the comb
Loosen and ease the tangled hairs
A nightly ceremony
A shame that morning will come
With newly tangled hair
And fresh shame

Trifecta’s weekend challenge is 33 words using the word “tooth,” but not in the usual losing a tooth context! I’m always up for a little critique!

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